Good News, Bad News, Old News

Rockin’ n Rollin’ that’s how I feel. Of course that’s after swallowing that the first draft of BC3 was boring and A LOT of coffee, but hey, you know, everyone needs a pick me up.

Mocha

Okay, so good news, bad news, old news. I’ll start with the old news. BC3 still needs a lot of work. Of course, it is still a first draft, so we knew this. Honestly, of the four novels I’ve outlined, it is the one with the weakest initial outline. In fact, to complete the first draft, I had to take a sharp turn off of the outline. Good news is that worked. Bad news is sometimes when you don’t have a plan, you end up somewhere else.

So the real bad news – first draft isn’t quite as good as I hoped. I know it’s a first draft, but that doesn’t mean I don’t want it to be solid ;-). The main weakness is the plot. Given my piss poor outline, this should not be a surprise. A disappointment, sure. A surprise, no. Not enough twists, no real turns, and no surprises. I guess that shouldn’t surprise me. But the good news is that I’ve got three more drafts before I even begin to consider it done and the magic is in the rewrites. Plenty of time and opportunity to get creative and put some twisty turns and surprises in.

Now on to the good news. Overall, the draft is pretty clean — grammar, spelling, etc. I’m sure I’ll screw that up in future drafts … after all, my beta readers need something to fix. The banter between the characters is great and as my readers have told me, this is a big part of what makes the books so fun. So basically, I’ve got the same fun characters, in the same fun and intriguing storyworld, with a mystery that’s not mysterious enough. Fixing the plot is easy. This should be a no-brainer, right?

So, I did some brainstorming with my alpha reader and came up with some solid ideas. I spent this evening plugging the ideas into the outline. And when I did that, I realized that a major significant sequence happens too early in the book, so I picked up three chapters and shifted them about ten chapters later. After looking back over the changes, I am convinced they’ll make the story more interesting and more fun. Good. I’m also sure there’s room for more twists, but that’s why I have a coupleish or so more drafts after this one.

Of course right now, I feel like I just got the recipe for a great new dessert. It looks and sounds yummy. I’ve read the ingredients and the instructions and it doesn’t seem too difficult to make. Of course, I haven’t gone shopping yet, attempted to find that one hard to find ingredient, discovered that kitchen implement I never thought was necessary just might be, or started the general work of making the dessert. Yep, the kitchen might end up a mess. Any time I make the number and type of plot changes I just made, it’s a lot. Even little ones have a ripple effect that cascade through chapters. The reread could be fun.

For now, I feel energized and not overwhelmed. So that’s something. We’ll see how I feel tomorrow.

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